Particularly appreciated "A Housewife," in which you again display a rare ability to employ both an intricate rhyme scheme and a perhaps even more intriguing rhythm (complete stops in mid-line, then run-on lines that sweep the reader up and carry him forward).
The buried "-one" rhymes are all the more effective for being almost imperceptible.
Rick Rozoff
The buried "-one" rhymes are all the more effective for being almost imperceptible.
Rick Rozoff